All Comments on 'An Unusual Birth'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
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Could use a bit more detail. More pages in general. Perhaps more detail into the pregnancy, and definitely more detail in the birth scene. Other than that, very enjoyable and unique.

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