by LoveTabooPlay
She must be over 22 years old and still calling him Daddy? How about just calling him Dad? Daddy makes her sound so juvenile, or like a bimbo. Please give her a more mature vocabulary fitting her age and education, constant use of Daddy gets on one's nerves -- like fingernails on a chalkboard.
**I did not give this five stars (overuse of Daddy), but the system read five stars because my hand moved the mouse to soon.
I'm 18 and still call my father Daddy, and my mother Mommy. I'm not a bimbo by any means. The author can characterize his characters however he likes.
I cant wait to see how many positions you can think up on following chapters. Keep writing.
I enjoyed reading this article. I'm also an adult and I call my parents mommie & daddy! I do think that more details could have lead up to the scene. It was really intriguing, but way too short!
WELL WE/we GAVE IT 5 STARS BECAUSE WE/we LOVE THE PREMISE OF THE STORY AND WHAT FATHER DOESN'T LIKE TO HERE HIS DUAGHTER CALL HIM """DADDY"""
I too enjoy my Dad as does he me , He is over 40+ and a great guy . Please keep writing more on this as both enjoy reading about others
I thought the title was a little silly, but the story is passable. Kudos for making him "average".
I mean, imagine the possibilities with two dicks. And the acrobatics!
I thought that this first chapter should have been longer, so I'll wait and see what happens next....