All Comments on 'An Unusually Warm Day in May'

by Fmypckt

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KitPiscesKitPiscesover 6 years ago
Hot story

Well written and sooo sexy. Keep writing.

Rnlaw44Rnlaw44over 6 years ago
Good 1st submission

Good start, take your time in coming chapters. You were doing very well setting the scene for us, then jumped ahead to self exploring although sensual, too quick. Then bell rang and all was done. Please continue, i will look for next chapters.

midgalbjmidgalbjover 6 years ago
Hot

A hot day and a hot story! Great Bio also, I really enjoyed that !

FASfanFASfanover 6 years ago
And what a delightful fantsy it is!

You have done very well with your first story, Fmypckt! Thank you for sharing your obvious talent with us and please write much more -- five stars and welcome to Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very hot story!

Hmm a very juicy first story, I look forward to further chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
This was made before I know it was cause I read it a month ago either way nice story

Not happy

CordanceCordanceover 5 years ago
Great detail

Your description was dead on. I could see in my mind's eye the students as they turned their attention to the teacher. I had to stop reading about halfway thru your tale to turn my air conditioner up a notch. Your words came thru the story and raised my temperature. 5 stars all the way. Keep up the good work and I will keep up the reading.

fitter862fitter862over 4 years ago
Loved it

My cock got so hard reading this.

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uabout 4 years ago
Damn that was HOTT!

Mmm,I bet Miss Emory's aroused scent was wafting in that hot classroom and sparking all their hormornal senses into overdrive,Jensen no one wanted to leave when the bell sounded.....Oh dear,your such a tease!!! You must continue with this story and tell us what she said AND do to Seth and Grace... 5stars for this btw

FmypcktFmypcktover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for 20,000 views everyone!

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