Ana: La Venganza Ch. 01

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For the moment, though, she finally reached home and ran across the lawn to the front door as a group of boys gathered on the sidewalk in front of her house.

Realizing the door was locked, and that her key had been in her jeans, she spun, frantically facing the group of boys who gawked at her naked body. Pointing at her, they made rude gestures.

"Hola Ana!" one of the said, making a stroking motion in the air at the front of his crotch.

Finally, recovering her wits, she darted off of the porch and ran around the garage to the side gate. Pushing it open, she bolted through and slammed it behind her.

She knew that the back door was locked, but for the moment, she was safe in her own backyard.

Leaning against the house, she breathed hard...trying to recover from all that had just happened and the fact that she'd been running nearly non-stop since she left the school.

Ana thought about poor Felipe and prayed that he would be okay.

Suddenly, her emotions exploded like lava from a volcano. She was angry and terrified and she wept.

She wept at the horror she'd experienced. She'd nearly been raped and she'd had to endure the embarrassment of running home naked in public.

She cried for Felipe.

On her knees, naked, save for one torn sock on her foot, Ana turned her tear-stained face to the sun...as pure black rage grew like a dark tornado, swirling madly at the center of her soul.

They would pay, she swore again out loud. They would pay.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Awesome story! Really grabs a persons attention. It seemed very realistic to me; with the characters (especially Ana) reacting as I believe many (but not all) would. My hope, or wish, is that you continue this story with how, exactly, Ana gets her revenge; perhaps a different chapter for each guy that attacked her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Definitely NC/R

Even though Ana was exposed, it was not of her own doing, but then, many characters in stories on this site become naked not of their own volition. How ever, in this case, poor Ana not only was stripped,she also was sexually violated, against her wishes. Not only was this a sex crime, it also is a hate crime as it is committed by a group of white guys against a lone Latina woman.

Elmer100Elmer100about 7 years ago

Good story, does she avenge herself or not? A chapter 2 would be great.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Good start

Good start of this story I would love to read how she gets them back maybe in a few years she becomes a dominant and force them to be her slaves and make ther life hell on earth !

Xplorer2000Xplorer2000over 10 years ago
Nothing erotic about this story.

I realize that people find non-consensual sex to be erotic but there is no real sex in the story. You have an attempted rape and a lot of fighting. I would have put it in the Non-erotic catagory.

I do think this is good writing though and I like Ana's character. I hope she gets fucked in the next chapter (consensual or not) and it would be great to see her attackers get sodomized in every way, maybe by a gang of bikers who want to help Ana get her revenge.

Also, I hope this isn't going to be a story where all the gringos are bad. That would be no better than a story in which all the Latinos were portrayed as bad.

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