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I read "The Fifth Season" this week (a fantasy novel by N. K. Jemisin) and saw the Logan movie. These amazing works intimidated and inspired me as a storyteller. I doubt my own efforts can approach the quality of those masterpieces, but I'm hoping their influence can have a positive impact. I'm using what I learned from them to revise the next few draft chapters of Anahet's story. I hope to make the characters feel more authentic, flawed, and real. I should have Chapter 3 ready for publication by the end of the month. Thank you for reading!

MORE MORE MORE! Honestly loving the story so far. Keep up the good work!