by Tepin
I liked it, but why rush the ending? There was no sensible reason to do so or did you just get bored?
Loved the plot line. It really works, plausible and erotic. Why the rush to end the story? The last paragraph was two years of good story lost. A very easy read.
Good premise.
But it dies.
Needed much more touching, teasing, rubbing, kissing, licking of her asshole before cock enters it.
Three stars.