by Zachs_dreams
A pretty good effort,a decent build up and realsitic dialogue helped. But there was some strange imagery "an electric whimper?"
I am not sure that she would have sucked him off, the first time she took a backdoor delivery. A little more about her psychological state would have helped too.
smell that would surround this event and the blood--Why would any woman want an oversized dickey splitting her rectum apart?
Great story. anal virgin. make one think how hard it could be to take a cock that big the first time ouch take it out
This story was nicely written. Syntax was perfect, and the story was relaxing enough to be believable. Very nicely done!
It was such a turn on, now I wanna get fucked in the ass just from reading this