All Comments on 'Anal Virgin'

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IntercontinentalIntercontinentalover 15 years ago
Would She Have Sucked Him off?

A pretty good effort,a decent build up and realsitic dialogue helped. But there was some strange imagery "an electric whimper?"

I am not sure that she would have sucked him off, the first time she took a backdoor delivery. A little more about her psychological state would have helped too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
You forgot to mention the delicious

smell that would surround this event and the blood--Why would any woman want an oversized dickey splitting her rectum apart?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Going deep into the hole

Great story. anal virgin. make one think how hard it could be to take a cock that big the first time ouch take it out

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
So good..,, So believable

This story was nicely written. Syntax was perfect, and the story was relaxing enough to be believable. Very nicely done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Turn on

It was such a turn on, now I wanna get fucked in the ass just from reading this

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