All Comments on 'Anastasia Ch. 02'

Good story so far. Need to find an editor, couple of spelling errors but not bad. Shout out to Raleigh NC :)

Interesting so far. Would really like to know how they first met.

It's a hot story: bad guy trying to maybe redeem himself, possession, control. The story is pretty good as is but could be even hotter if it was fleshed out some more. It goes pretty fast, almost too fast.

Thanks for posting!

Great storyline but it becomes irritating when you are forced to focus more on grammar and spelling than the actual story. Please use an editor because this story is too good to let easily fixed mistakes ruin it!

He's a demon. Demons, particularly lust demons, don't redeem by acting on their lust, except in very stupid stories.

This is a really, really good story line. It would really have a dofficult turn at the end of fhe whole series, but I will see how you will handle that. Also, please do ignore those comments bellow. I was so emerged in the story thay I barely noticed the errors. Plus, even though demons are supposed to be the bad guy, like I said, you still have the hold in the whole plot and I think it's really cool that you use that "he is trying to be good" card. Please, continue writing this story as a way of pleasing yourself. Write it for yourself (one of the rules in fiction writing). Lots of love!

Uhrm, where's the rest of the story? I know you have it. Don't ask me how I know. It would be nice to read it. Fuckit. Really nice. Shot for it so far.