All Comments on 'Anastasias's Story'

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Schwanze1Schwanze1almost 6 years ago
Got

bored. Didn't finish.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Quite the opposite for me...

I thought that the story was very well written. Please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
cheaters never win

she cheated on her family that she loves ,for what a memory Damn!

DaniellaxmjtsDaniellaxmjtsalmost 6 years ago
Room for improvement

The descriptions are much too wordy and flowery for my taste. Call it a cock, penis, dick, pussy or whatever it is and be consistent. You loose the reader with so many adjectives and description, it takes away from your story. I do see potential to be a better writer, keep at it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great fucking story

Glad to see your scores don't reflect the moronic comments which are the worst part of Literotica. Very few constructive and mostly just trashing someone's kink.

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