by bbtp41
I thought that the story was very well written. Please write more!
she cheated on her family that she loves ,for what a memory Damn!
The descriptions are much too wordy and flowery for my taste. Call it a cock, penis, dick, pussy or whatever it is and be consistent. You loose the reader with so many adjectives and description, it takes away from your story. I do see potential to be a better writer, keep at it.
Glad to see your scores don't reflect the moronic comments which are the worst part of Literotica. Very few constructive and mostly just trashing someone's kink.