All Comments on 'Anchors Away'

The story has promise, but you have so many missing words and grammatical problems that it's almost impossible to read. A few here and there are one thing, but you've got errors in every paragraph, if not every line.

A good editor would really help this story shine.

I gave up part way through after trying to decipher things like: "But to make it worse the girls had been banded from competing because their coach could not keep it in his pants." Banded? Also, questioning statements should end with a question mark.

one star's the lowest I can give it.

I quit reading your tale well before I was able to discern if you even had a plot due to your misuse of homonyms, synonyms, syntax, and your abhorrent spelling. What had a promising beginning was marred beyond repair.

Get an editor and give it another try.

Jerry

hey great story but you really do need to find an editor that works for you but apart from that is a good story line with lots of promise please keep writing

you did a reasonable job for your first try.

you do need an editor, as does even the best authors as they can see things missing or misspelled that you cannot see.

keep writing.

Jack

due to the other reviews. I could not get past the title which should have been "Anchors Aweigh". Sorry.