All Comments on 'And Emma Makes Three'

by mrjones502003

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Excellent realistic story

Great story and descriptions. The comparisons of the two women are very well done. Keep up the fine writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
really

do you always trust people who don't tell you the truth, even after you know. good for you don't be surprised if it not always as "nice" or is it ?

Girls_cum_firstGirls_cum_firstover 16 years ago
FFM...NOTHING BETTER IN LIFE

Great story! Every horny man's dream, and some lucky guys have been there. Well written, good dialogue and not at all smutty as some stories can be done. 11/10! Like to read mine and vote too?

Girls_cum_firstGirls_cum_firstover 16 years ago
FFM...NOTHING BETTER IN LIFE

Great story! Every horny man's dream, and some lucky guys have been there. Well written, good dialogue and not at all smutty as some stories can be done. 11/10! Like to read mine and vote too?

fregenfregenover 16 years ago
What if?

What if he had not been okay with it? What would that have done to their marriage?<p>

She made a unilateral decision to bring another into their marriage. Very risky in my opinion.<p>

Finally, Teri and Emma were college roommates for 3 years. At some point they became lovers. Craig and Teri met as college sophmores. Obviously Teri and Emma remained lovers while Teri was dating Craig. The reverse double standard? Two girls don't count?<p>

It would appear that Teri, and perhaps Craig, defines cheating differently than most of us would.<P>

Thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice

I really enjoyed your story.

That said, the metaphors were a mix of incredibly clever and weirdly distracting. It made for a choppy, albeit fun ride.

Finally, the opening paragraph ruined some of the dramatic suspense. Sure, we know it's a group sex story, so it will probably end with the characters in bed together. But bluntly stating how the story is going to end popped what little surprise there could have been.

Regardless, it was a hot read, and I hope you continue posting tales!

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