All Comments on 'And Then What Happened? Ch. 02'

by RibaldWriter

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

So far so good,need to keep the story going. Will be looking for another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
That was great!!!!

Yes Please, More, Much more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Keep it going! Great story with huge potential and hopefully many more parts to it.

redlion75redlion75over 6 years ago
Babies

Is she on the pill

Ducky7Ducky7over 6 years ago
Great story of a loving Mom and Son

Breakfast is the most important meal of the day... Protein is also a plus...

It can be direct into the stomach put in coffee as a creamer or used as a spread on toast...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
More please

Dates hotels vacations, impregnation?? Dresses heels nylons, legs up,make Tim absolutely destroy Carla...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
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Too much slut-shaming! Bad lit!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Now that they understand each other

Agree that the dynamics could be maintained or even enhanced with less of the slut shaming.

A true loving partnership would have her in the driver’s seat at least half the time

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
When you hear, -. We need to talk

This is the conversation you want to have.

To me, there is nothing erotic or sexy about calling her a slut.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Where's Chapter 3?

Awesome, I Loved It, I'd cut back on calling her a slut, but other than that, it was really good, please write more!

RibaldWriterRibaldWriterabout 6 years agoAuthor
This story line is going to be continued...

...just give me a little time. I'm thinking about where these two characters can go, and how they're going to get there.

I'm dealing with life stuff, so sitting down to write is on the back burner right now.

I check for reads, adds, and comments daily, so I know you are still interested.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I love it keep it going

Clancy31015Clancy31015almost 6 years ago
What's next?

I keep looking, praying, and hoping that you'll write more of this series and your Ready Maid Family series, but nothing has popped up recently.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Chapter 3 In The Works!?

Where'd You Disappear To Dude? LOL

Ever Gonna Release Chapter 3?

Really Wanna See Where These Two Characters Go.

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
PLEASE DON'T THINK ABOUT IT DO IT.! !!!!^*!^*!^*!

This story could go on forever, you have it all laid out. Lots of sex, and because,

she's still so young woops maybe a baby. Nice read,well done. THANKS

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