by RibaldWriter
So far so good,need to keep the story going. Will be looking for another chapter.
Keep it going! Great story with huge potential and hopefully many more parts to it.
Breakfast is the most important meal of the day... Protein is also a plus...
It can be direct into the stomach put in coffee as a creamer or used as a spread on toast...
Dates hotels vacations, impregnation?? Dresses heels nylons, legs up,make Tim absolutely destroy Carla...
Agree that the dynamics could be maintained or even enhanced with less of the slut shaming.
A true loving partnership would have her in the driver’s seat at least half the time
This is the conversation you want to have.
To me, there is nothing erotic or sexy about calling her a slut.
Awesome, I Loved It, I'd cut back on calling her a slut, but other than that, it was really good, please write more!
...just give me a little time. I'm thinking about where these two characters can go, and how they're going to get there.
I'm dealing with life stuff, so sitting down to write is on the back burner right now.
I check for reads, adds, and comments daily, so I know you are still interested.
I keep looking, praying, and hoping that you'll write more of this series and your Ready Maid Family series, but nothing has popped up recently.
Where'd You Disappear To Dude? LOL
Ever Gonna Release Chapter 3?
Really Wanna See Where These Two Characters Go.
This story could go on forever, you have it all laid out. Lots of sex, and because,
she's still so young woops maybe a baby. Nice read,well done. THANKS