All Comments on 'And When I Return Ch. 02-04'

Luvved This Sunblocked! Great details. Orangeville. Amaranth Road. Excitement is building. Is there more?

I have been to Orangeville many times to visit old Hi School friends and my Godson. Was tickled to read the narative. I swear I could picture the drive in my minds eye. O. The story is beginning to develop nicely too! If you need help with editing/proof reading don't be shy.

ok what is next

I await further installments with interest.

She obviously hadn't informed him of her assistant, and to me, that would have been a red flag. I would have thought that the rules would have been established before he committed to spending 2 weeks with them. Another red flag.