All Comments on 'Andi and The Inspector'

Wow! What a fantastic fantasy. I imagined myself as Andi as I moistened and squirmed in my chair. So lingeringly sexy. So explicit. So delightful. And true to the spirit of the story. I did not touch myself; forcing myself to wait for release and delight...... later!

Thank you for sharing.

such exquisite attention to detail.

beggars belief that the Author can be so Young

and have such a fertile imagination & such breathtaking wordcraft

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a well deserved & well earned 5 stars

for a most refreshing & engaging story.

You have kept Andrea purely curious and shocked at her own actions. Such a nicely arousing story you crafted! Introducing the two teachers was a worthwhile arouser, and opens the door for some punishment story back at school..Surprised you haven't written it yet for our enjoyment and arousal...good work here!

I love this: the fine detail, for example of all her clothing; the use of text messages as well as verbal instructions; and the idea of her pleading to be allowed to remove an article of clothing.

I have mixed feelings about the ending. At first it seemed a bit... Disappointing, in that having been naked and tied up in front of three men, she got away untouched! But then I always prefer stories that surprise the reader by not following the expected course. So I like it. It's definitely the most erotic story I've read here in which nobody has sex!

Damn Andi, that story was hot. Very stimulating. 5*

Very erotic, just teasing the whole way through with your excellent word pictures.

Very classy too

Love to see how you handle a touching/sex chapter

You really do have a talent.

I can't wait to see what further adventures are to come. Great writing!

Very rich in details and wonderful inner thoughts during the story. A real insight into the author's mind while she experiences her fantasy.

Damn, girl!! You have a very fertile imagination and a gift for story telling ... Can we make this (and Part 2) into a movie?

This story is very well written. I especially like the way the story builds with the inspector slowly getting Andi to expose herself more and more daringly.

Another wonderful story I love her desire to be controlled and submissive. The buildup is good with it being a nice pace with her desire to be controlled building as she receives more humiliating instructions. A great read