All Comments on '"Andi" Challenges to Triumph Ch. 01'

243, my compliments for this impressive piece of Realist Fiction. Believable characters and adult dialogue. The introspective POV put me right into Lyns head.

I look forward to reading future chapters of this family drama.

I didn't realize Andi was blind until the last page, nor that Drew was related until the 3rd. Either way, a kick-ass, emotional rollercoaster. I will admit - I cried for Ashlyn's part.

I hung on for the whole ride. A great piece of work 243.

The abrupt ending and the choice not to tell Roger about the infidelity left a bit of a sour taste but still a solid 4 stars.

As in the past you have brought out just more than sex. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Such a great story, woven so well. I love the character tie ins, the background build up, and the very intense emotion put into the fabric of it all.. Moving to chapter two....

I made an account just so I could favorite this story. You should really consider writing a book, I would defiantly buy it.

Absolutely great read. I loved that it started dramatic.

Wonderful heart warming story

this is the most confusing story i have ever read on literotica. not a single thing about this story makes sense .one star

What a clever story, loved it.

What you did here, in the way of slow, careful character development, and gradually allowing the backstory and plot to unfold was masterful. Thank you for a finely tuned tale. You edged your readers, literally! Well done!

You claim to be not a writer........I disagree!!

This is truly a beautifully written story .The misdirected anger and jealousy that fueled ‘Lyn and her self destructive hatred was palpable , and in such great contrast to Andi with her innocence and naivety . The revelation that Andi was blind only began to surface when you started hinting at it , I can’t speak for anyone else , but it certainly blindsided me ! Your prowess as an author is above and beyond ,( I based this opinion on this one story , as I have yet to read any of your other work , yet I have the confidence to stand by my opinion , this story is just that good ) I expect to see your future works gracing the shelves of Barnes and Noble at some later date !

Loved the story ,the only problem is I just feel bad for Ashlyn sure she is bratty to her sister, but good lord. Her husband is more loyal to andi and drew than his wife , had he simply told the truth that drew was takeing the vehicle. There would have been a chance lyn would have accepted the relationship …. even if she didn’t in my opinion that beta male vibes doing that to her. And what they just expect the relationship to work itself out, cheating isn’t a light issue, it’s fucking terrible. Then the husband takes the kids from lyn over her claim of him cheating. Again knowing full well it’s a miss understanding. The whole family was railroading as Lyn and manipulating her from the start, andi does acknowledge it was her actions that led to lyn cheating on roger but in my opinion the damage had already been done again I loved the story this is more so a critique of the characters in the story rather than a critique of the writer

I never saw that this was in Incest/Taboo, I got here from just a link in your might like in Loving wives, I wouldn't have given it a look at, but I'm glad I have read this.

Good writing, good description and plot,