by adamlily1972
I haven't decided if I really like this story, even though I gave it a 4.
You write very well, I was drawn in and you kept my attention.
Keep going -- maybe even on this one, though it is a fine ending...
Whoa now that was crazy. Love brainwashing n non con but that was much. The only reason why I stuck around is because you write this so well I could picture everything, and you did a terrific job. There are parts I think were hot af, and fantasize about it being me.