All Comments on 'Andrew's Story'

Doinique Francon and Howard Roark as interpreted by Ernest Hemingway.

so she will drop em for any strong good looking guy on the first date that hasnt hired her.

Powerful images and the tantalizing, slow build-up was crowned with ferocious mating. Neat construction, teasingly paced and a satisfying climax. Wow, that was good for me.

I love the way the story and romance unfold. Building up the tension in the participants and anticipation in the reader. Well written, look forward to reading more. Thank you.

The classy setting and picturesque details weaves a magnificent story of passion and seduction. Thanks for sharing. God bless and best of luck.