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Click here"Don't worry about it Andy. They won't bother us because of you. That's enough for me. Now take me home, please, and take me to bed." She said, her hand wandering over to his crotch.
Andy smiled a bit and pressed the gas a little harder.
- COMMENTS
Wargameralmost 3 years agoHmmmm, great story, but never finished and by the looks of things will never be finished.
Like most o hate unfinished tales, they alway score lowly
2/5
thedayafterover 6 years agoLiked this story but found the image of a 20 year old women skipping everywhere absurdly childish. Other than that a good story that still has a ways to go.
Rapier875over 8 years agoBrilliant read, great characters, great story line.
Pleased to know that chapter 3 is being worked on.
Really looking forward to reading it when it's released !
Thanks again.
wakingDownover 8 years agoAuthorI am trying to finish the third chapter of AaS, though it will be a while yet. It seems it will be a longer chapter than the first two; that I no longer write fiction in fast, short, easily consumed bits anymore. Take that as a foible on my part. Sorry to keep people waiting, but my timetables, body, mind, and thus ability to work on a regular basis, are all shot to shit. I appreciate all the feedback I get on these stories, I read all of it, and I consider everything that is sent. I can't always say that the feedback effects (proper usage of 'effect'? I'm terrible about getting them mixed up) the story, as the story is what it is; I find out how it ends up making its way to the end goal as I write it, for the most part. But I wouldn't trade the feedback for anything. Knowing what people think of the current chapters lets me know what I am doing right, and where I've bit a boner, and that's priceless.
Anonymousover 8 years agoI would hate to think that this is it. And as you're the writer, don't listen to anyone. Take the story wherever you think it should go. You're a storyteller with a vision!
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoThanks for writing, and sharing. Somehow I dont think we've seen the last of TJ and his minions. I cant wait to see what happens next. You write really well, keep it up :)
