All Comments on 'Angel and Dominic: Welcome Home'

by GoodGirlBlue

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Please continue

was a bit short but maybe you could tell us how they got together - the next submission could be a prequel...pls pls continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Great story

I really enjoyed this story even though it was a little short. You have included an emotion other than blind lust which I appreciate very much.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Have to agree with other posters

Was just getting into it, then it was all over. A prequel would be nice: How did they meet? How did they hook up? You've created two interesting characters that we'd LOVE to read more about! Keep up the good work!

mrskelleymrskelleyalmost 16 years ago
ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEASE!

Was getting good!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Love IT!

You should write a new story

C_frommnC_frommnover 13 years ago
Angel

You should do More of Dominic and Angel.

Talk about their first time and How her Family took it when she Married a White Man?

darkfaerdarkfaerabout 13 years ago
Oral fixation

Wow it is good short story. Please expand on this couple because you have hit on your hands. That was one of best oral sewx scene I have read in long time.

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