All Comments on 'Angel Ch. 01'

This has been a different type of story . I would like to see where you go with this. It has many different ways to take it and personally I would like to see more.

I want to like this story as I do Daniel but it is so sad, and full of darkness.

What types of representation did these men have? Based on Daniel I know you are a good writer but this story holds no appeal unless one or both are freed promptly. Love behind bars just does not work for me. Know you're audience. Daniel appeals as a sweet, romantic love story Angel seems the direct opposite.

I'd like to see where you take this. Please continue with it.

Life behind bars is a challenge. But it seems that Angel has connected in a way with Joey, who is sort of protective. Please make the developing romance and love between Joey and Angel a gentle rather than a rough love. I imagine Joey has a nice hairy chest where Angel can find a comforting place to rest his head.

Willl you be continuing each of these stories about the different guys or are they just to be taken as is?

What a tough situation this kid found himself in. He'd be eaten alive behind bars where there are alot more men way worse than Nick. I hope Joey is a decent person. Makes a good start.

Right now my main focus is Daniel, but eventually yes, they will be continued. Thanks for reading. Ch.3 of Daniel should be up in the next couple days.

I am surprised you have not resumed this story. Joey and Angel can live well together in the cell -- and I think they can make love and fall in love. I still imagine Joey with a muscled body, a good coating of chest hair for his masculine and sexy muscular body. I think Joey could treat Angel very nicely there and make his life more pleasant.