All Comments on 'Angel Ch. 01'

I hope this is the beginning of a true romance!

I am here for this.

I chuckled when Angelica smacked his hand from going near her booty, hahaha.

Cannot wait to see where this goes

Please don't stop.... Add more.... I agree with anonymous, make it a good love adventure

I'm so here for Ivan..... I can't wait for more.....

Some many authors could learn a thing or two about how to write love scenes! I look forward to reading more.

Really enjoyed reading that, bound to be a awesome story (I hope). Please don't keep us waiting too long.

It's been awhile since a story this good appeared in this Catagory...thanks and keeping doing what you do best....writing!

I really enjoyed reading your story , and your writing style is really easy to read .

Keep up the good work my friend.

Really nice writing style that's easy to follow, with really good editing.

Your intro sounded like you wanted to go deeper into these characters, but the rush to the bedroom seemed to belie that earlier premise. I'd like to read more detailed romantic scenes and see you bring sensuality into more areas of the story, from the food, to the clothing, to the feelings of the character.

Liking the story but you contradicted your intention by rushing straight to the sex scene. There was absolutely no build up of characters at all. We didn't even get a first kiss, no flirting, nothing

Hope you continue writing this was a perfect meet cute but what was Ivan's initial visit about the first day they met? Will he reveal he's her landlord? Will they continue to see each other? Will his nosey sister ruin things or push for the relationship? And where's the drama?