All Comments on 'Angel Lust 04'

Next chapter is in the approval queue!

Please enjoy <3

you do leave us wanting more with such short chapters.

Please consider getting an editor the story is good but spoiled by mistakes a good editor or proof reader would spot.

I apologize for the mistakes. Rox told me three times already where i repeated a few lines. That's what i get for always being in a rush...I will have another pair of eyes look it over before submitting the next chapters.

In the next chapter i mention the shortness of the chapters. They will be longer from here on out. Thanks!

-Nam