All Comments on 'Angel of Desire Ch. 03'

by LaSalia

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Great story so far!

I just wish you would continue and finish it. Though that seems highly unlikely because, if I’m right, you haven’t added anything under this title since 2012.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
finish it!!!

Please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Just found this story!

I love it and am so bummed it is unfinished! If you are still writing I would love if you write more of this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

please finish this story

JustonelookJustonelookover 10 years ago
More please!

You have a great style and I like this a lot! The characters are well describe and he story flows nicely. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

what happened please write more

LovelyLvsLovelyLvsover 11 years ago

i'd love to read more!!

pedsrnmom2pedsrnmom2over 11 years ago

really enjoyed this please continue

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
@ Katgoddess1

Oh yes, but unlike them, he might be saved yet!

katgoddess1katgoddess1almost 12 years ago
What a jerk

He is just as guilty as the men in the village!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Aaaaagh! So freakin good!

<3 <3

VacentsVacentsalmost 12 years ago
More please.

My favorite so far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great story

Please post next chapter soon, hope he has a change of heart and keeps her

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I went to school for creative writing but haven't tried to make a living off it yet. Right now I just need an outlet for my creative juices, ;-). The things I write for this site are VERY dark. If you're a hopeless romantic and want to read about two people who are sweet an...

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