by Mamateya
Wouldn't work if you posted it in Sci/fi. Beam me up Scotty. This was bad.
I love the story , keep it up ,you have either; a great source or are a an amazing author! if your not . you should be!
Maybe you should experiment more with length and building up the tension, but overall an interesting idea! :)
A femist sex story is like a G rated porno, a complete waste of time.
If this was on another site I would like it but sorry just stupid here!
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