- Romance
- Angel of Mercy
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Macy and I thank you sincerely, Matilda Jacobs, for your angel of mercy act with me in the ninth grade.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 months agoTighter? Tighter? So she was baseball accommodating loose or what? BTW I didn't see a speck of romance
PileDriver48over 7 years agoJust click over and read them. What? There are none?
In my imagination, I can see the romance building and I can understand "A" meaning. Don't know if what I perceive is "THE" meaning the writer had in his mind. Doesn't.matter, all fiction and erotica in particular is about unlocking the imagination of the reader.
Thanks, GeneMajors, for your gift to my imagination.
pcthronealmost 8 years agoCompletely agree with you.Spot on description that's what i had in my mind but you covered most of it so i don't need to write the whole stuff.
THERE IS DEFINITELY NI ROMANCE AT ALL. Belongs to Erotic couplings.
Hey author you sure posted it in wrong category.
Do some more work and portray your characters a li'l more better.Give us readers a more insight about the characters.You should develop your characters more & atleast start some Romance build up so you can follow up on the story if you are going to continue in its next part.
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoThe romance was weak, but not absent. It could've used a little more description of his longtime interest in her and of her deciding that not all men were "piss." That would have made it more romantic. I do believe it fits in the romance category because they do develop a long-term relationship. I hope you will continue to write and submit here
