All Comments on 'Angel, Stripped Ch. 01'

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orefinnorefinnabout 16 years ago
Every club patron's fantasy

Even if you have only watched the dancers from the tables and never had a lap dance this story will relive the thoughts and feelings when that special dancer stepped into the spotlights. Well done and well written you crafted a story that fuels the imagination.

Ms.RotfeuerMs.Rotfeuerabout 16 years ago
With Purpose

It is clear word usage is intentional in this story because " My God that was so fucking hot!". Excellent premise and descriptions. Another "woman with cajones" that warms the loins. I certainly hope "that was just a start".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Simply AWESOME !

I can't wait to read the next chapter ...

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