All Comments on 'Angel, Stripped Ch. 02'

Slightly improbable but very, very, well done. You have an excellent command of the language and an imagination to match. Why would Angel pick on the narrator in preference to the (many) others that she met? Who cares, the narrator tells a good story.

Thanks.

This story rings beautifully with all its details. From the fun explanation of wiener to the clicking of his shoes. Angel's enthusiasm for art is inspirational. It certainly makes one want to participate in more exhibitionist acts. The best erotica from you yet. So many possibilities for the third chapter... don't keep us waiting too long darling.

"Hush up and get it done already."

What a fantastic line! Can't you just see the blond in the doorway saying that? This series of stories are written with the perfect balance of words to bring the reader into the situation, but not overdoing it.

Thanks for writing!