All Comments on 'Angela Learns Some New Games'

Found this series of Angela stories after loving your Demon Child ones and looking for more. Again you've written a scene where I find it easy to "believe" and slip into it myself. You have a great talent, thank you and now I'll spend the rest of my day waiting for my man to get home with eagerness!

Please use question marks when appropriate. It is distracting when someone asks a question and you end it with a period.

The accidental use of the safe word should not be punished, that is exactly why a word that would not be easily uttered in the heat of the moment is recommended. I didn't like that it ended with a cane when most of us see it as a Dom's mistake.

I like the general idea of the story, but I don't get the dialogues. They don't sound natural. If you tried reading them out loud you'd know what I mean. Just a tip...

Otherwise I have to admit that the story keeps my interest. An editor could do miracles with it.