All Comments on 'Angela, My Angel Pt. 04'

by Munchn

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stroudlestroudleover 6 years ago
Forget about Ed

Ive been enjoying this series and hope it continues a bit longer and that Angela can put Ed finnaly behind her and patch up things with Pheonix. I felt the pain from both in this nicely done.

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Meover 6 years ago

I love this series and I hope Angela and Phoenix do get back together but like Phoenix said it won't be the same. I know this from experience. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

fishingrod48fishingrod48over 6 years ago
Great Writing

You certainly let lose on this chapter. It was sad but so well written. Hope to see further chapters

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 6 years ago
pretty good

I have only read a couple of parts to this series, but I have to say this one chapter is very well written, and it is sad to read about the ending of a relationship

Slurpy29Slurpy29over 6 years ago
Not Matching Up

Sorry, the story line in this chapter left me feeling I’ve read this before. Previous chaps had the key swapping ceremony, tragic car accident and now after being together for over a year a BF comes back. Angela is going to throw this all away and now she needs space. I will continue to read the series but I’m missing some of the imagination and creativity of previous chaps.

MunchnMunchnover 6 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you to all of you for all the comments. They (you) are definitely encouraging me to write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Another chapter

The entire series is very well written and have loved every word. Just wondering if the saga will continue?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
more

loved it want more

AntneilAntneilover 3 years ago

A very good story, but not a good ending needs continuation.

Nerdyqueen94Nerdyqueen94over 2 years ago

This left me empty sorry but the energy from before was just gone.

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