All Comments on 'Angela Pt. 01'

A nice start. We'll see where the romance goes from here.

Lue

You have me wanting more.

that guy sounds a little mental, unless theres some sort of history there

No sex scenes

Well written and very plausible. Like someone said here somewhere - I also are looking for more!

Dude, you, need, to, use, less, commas, 95% of them are not needed!

She was saving herself for the love of her life back home, but gave herself to some guy in the dorm because she had a drink!

Get real dude!

...so well written. The reader falls inescapably into this guy's mind., I smell a wee bit of Holden Caulfield in this adolescent. 5*

Hope I am not making a mistake by reading Pt2 of this crap.

So sympathy for bitches/bastards who get drunk and fuvk up

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