by highclassic
The part of the story with her daughter just didn't fit with the rest of the story.
Ender, sorry but the daughter did fit. She furthered her mother's education. It satisfied and updated her thoughts of what she was
taught and today's.
Copy my comment from "Angela's Choice Ch. 01," and paste it below.
I agree withDadDavis.
All aspects of the story worked. Thankyou for a.very enjoyable stiry.
Again well written and I agree with another responder, Daughter/Mother interaction was part of her growth.
All 7 pages of parts 1 and 2 create a story of love and care not often seen here. I would like to read the book but it seems as if the story only is complete.
5 stars for the story seems about 1 short of a high enough accolade.
Would love to have a chapter 3 where the daughter joins them for five