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Click here"If I was ever to marry, and my dear I have no plans to do that ever again," she was aware he had been married twice and had grown children, "I would certainly have a prenuptial agreement. Think of this as a prenup for a mistress. It would be a simple contract, renewable annually. You would have a job title, how do you like Personal Assistant, with an expense account and a salary." He reached for her hand and kissed her palm. "While you will find your duties extremely demanding, I am sure that you would like the benefits package." Her voice trembled with emotion, "You know I love you. You own me heart and soul. I trust you to take care of me. You tell me what you want from me and I will give it to you or die trying. Now can you please take me home and fuck my brains out."
He was unusually gentle and attentive in his love making that night, until she impatiently demanded to be "fucked like the fucking pussy whore he knew she was." He laughed and told her to grab her ankles and grabbed the cane. "You want to be fucked rough, you better beg for it."
"Please sir, fuck me rough."
"Louder." and he struck her with the cane, her scream of pain sending a rush of power and excitement through him, he was pleased to see her toes curling up.
Their relationship had certainly progressed very satisfactorily.
Don't like how he seems to want an unresponsive blow up doll. You have not established her pussy or orgasms as being out of control. That makes the whole first half of this disturbing.
After finding the list order, which was a pain in the ass...
Some was good, some was bad. Bad grammar, outrageous scenarios. Good romance...then THIS chapter?! Talk about the shits and disappointment!
While your story kept my interest, it sure had its bad moments. Like talking about vomiting in the middle of a hot scene, ravishing her ass raw like he had, bumping her head into the wall, I mean, c'mon, I understand this is fantasy but a rape fantasy should be just that, don't go any lenght in denying this was way too brutal to be consensual.
Never thought I'd come across an equal opportunity BDSM story...but Xantu has nailed it...an imaginative concept -- and skillfully exeuted. Truly excellent...thanks for a great read...take care -and be well - hcl