All Comments on 'Angelic Demise'

loved it. want more....:)

More please.

Bourguit - I have more underway of a difference story that I have been working on, but if you like my writing feel free to read my other work called "The Untold Story of Sarah" if you visit my author info page you can find the links there. I am glad that you appreciated it!

Wolf9696 - I might write more based on this phenomena but I am not sure if I will continue Torin's Path. It was intended to be a short story, but if I get enough requests I can probably use the same universe I created here and make another series. First things first though I need to get my Erotic Comedy written first. I am just trying out different writing styles to find which suits my needs =]

in comparison with Untold story this text is totally nothing. Wasn't interesting to read at all.

Wonderful pacing and the right combination of "uh" with "ngh".

Untold Series is 100% better. Writing of scenes is fine but, it's randomness all over.

morrrrrreeeee

That was so damn beautiful and erotic! You always have the best works. I doubt many other people will even see this but I almost cried at the end. Thank god I came at the end of page 3.

This fic is trancendant.

Still incredibly good