by LLorelei
Generally don't stop to read lez stories...rarely....but glad I did...the thing just "flowed"....good plot, lil bit o non-erotic excitement...and i must say...you write pretty well.....enjoyed it....
This story really brings the heart rate and temperature up. Not to mention a few other physical effects.
Good job - my favorite kind of story!
Your characters are completely true and believable. Would love to hear more about them.
This is one of the best-written short stories, erotic or otherwise, that I've read here or anywhere in quite some time. Add in the hot, passionate sex, and you've got a winner.
I normally don't read romance stories, especially les romance. This story actually grabbed me long before the sexul aspect. The plot is believable (and as a FireMedic, I'd say pretty damn accurate). The characters are believable AND likeable, and the sex was beautifully written.