All Comments on 'Angelina's Submission Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Angelina's Submmission

Ch2 should give age of both parties. And should also cover more background on the two individuals.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Exceptional

I found your writing very good and hope that you will continue the story at another time. GGGGRRRRREEEAAAATTTT

GothLordGothLordover 15 years ago
continuation?

very hot, need more detaisl and a continuation

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Needs more!

Whoo, this was great! Looking forward to seeing more :D

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