All Comments on 'Angels Ch. 07'

This story is extremely interesting, but you need to flesh out the chapters. There are so many details that are hidden, so many things left. The world of the story needs to be clarified a lot more, it feels like each chapter should be at least 3 times as long.

DUde these are great stories. You should consider writing a novel.

finish them off we need more

You could make this into a 20+ chapter story....it's that GREAT!!! I was hoping that with her being mated to "2 sides of 1 soul", that your story would be similar to Fey World (under SyFy & Fantasy section). Please try to continue this wonderfully written story!!!! :)

This was awesome! I didn't find the sex attractive because I'm not into bdsm, I just read it for the story! Please keep writing!

I ABOUSLUTLY LOVED IT!!! And yes caps were needed. Pleases keep wrighting.

Your a great writer keep writing

I really loved this story and I love stories about angels I really hope you continue to write and consider writing about the sisters and other half breeds this could be an amazing series.