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Click here"Hey, where are you going?" Dave asked.
"I'm going to get ready," she said.
"Ready for what?"
"Didn't I tell you? Sharon and a few of the other girls are getting together tonight for drinks. They invited me to come along. You don't mind, do you?"
The smile on Dave's face faded, but was soon replaced with a forced grin. "No, of course not. Have fun."
He moved to his chair in the living room and opened his laptop. A moment later, Jessica passed by and gave him a peck on the lips as she made her way toward the door.
"What are you up to over there?" she asked while putting on her coat.
"Just writing," he responded. He counted to ten and began typing.
Very good story. but I thought you left it unfinished. I think nhe might suspect something of her " girls night out ".
I found the end worthwhile. He has bottled his rage and turned to writing to let it go. It also hinted she is not being faithful, and he is bottling that rage, too. An interesting choice by the author.
Powerful. And I love that it trolls all the people who can only handle the ONE story ending that they need to jerk off to. Oh no, inconclusive! No shit sherlock, not all stories fit your singular archetype.
Sometimes I think that writers on this site seek attention by carrying water instead of thoughts. Why bother telling a story without an ending...Just in case you think this is a naturalistic conclusion and we are supposed to do your work don't. This was a lazy ending to a potentially good story.
A decent story but the ending was a MAJOR let down. I would love to see a deal writer take this and give it an ending that makes sense