All Comments on 'Angie's Nature Find Ch. 02'

by Ramblerman

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NellaBarely2NellaBarely2over 12 years ago
Too simple ... Dun dat B4 ... But

This "vine" gets around, into a lot of very short episodes with all too similar "it just happened so quick" and time passes without much thought or emotion.. This second brief episode adds a little more personality ... And possibility. I'm betting you can more fully develop this theme and be better than those other "wanna-be writers". I challenge you to dig deeper and bring the voices to life, real beings or spirits, whatever. You CAN do it!

FallenAlfarFallenAlfaralmost 12 years ago

Add more characters, maybe a friend or aunt or cousin. Have her town or city impregnated by the plants.

PrincessLeeLeePrincessLeeLeeover 11 years ago
interesting

read this and instantly thought of that talking plant from "Little Shop of Horrors"...

i liked it, though

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