by eclecticdreamer
It was a good story that was almost too short. I especially liked the line, "butterflies performed stunning feats of acrobatics in her stomach."
Verry excellent story. I can't wait to read the rest of your submissions... Don't stop.
that was amzing to man u should keep writing on these stroys fa real cause ur amazing
Wow, im really surprised at how much i loved your story. why? Simply, i hate short stories but yours was really something really really great. Thankyou for surprising me, keep writing!!!!
Surprised that there aren't any comments on this one yet! Great quickie- Enjoyed it immensely.
This was a lovely hot story. How she planned to get even is a bit vague, but then anger can mush up even the clearest thinker (not to mention the whiskey). Whether looking for it or not, my guess is she has new insight.
I wonder what they will talk about when they finally get around to it. Hmm, now THAT will be a challenge for your well honed writing skills.
8~P
So "L" the spider had actually set a trap to steal Candice, gotta love it 8~)
DKP ... 50+ yo straight guy
8~P
So "L" the spider had actually set a trap to steal Candice, gotta love it 8~)
DKP ... 50+ yo straight guy
You could have gone on and on, but twas a great story...you need to write more for yourself and your fans.
Please continue this story...you don't know how wet you made me and how hard I came ❤️❤️
I hope this seduction into a Bi life continues with out Jake being involved!!
Wow! I love it! Here's hoping that you'll venture back to writing again and add to this great start! Thank you!