All Comments on 'Anita and Aaron'

This is my first submission and I would really like to know what people think. I'd like to know what could be improved and what you really liked about it. Please be honest. Thanks. (Note: I didn't want to have to rate it myself but I didn't know how else to put a note for people.)

This is a pretty good short story. Well thought out and written. Maybe you should try your hand at longer stories that allow for character development, short stories (1 or 2 pages) really don't really allow for development and really don't need it unless the author overextends himself/herself with a plot that needs more explanation, As is this was a very good first posting. KUDOS