by Socratic
Oh, this is just <i>lovely. </i> Even aside from the sexy parts (which are scorching, by the way!), the language is so beautiful and transportive. Anja sounds so free, which I think is a great descriptor for this piece as a whole: just incredibly freeing. Perhaps my favorite part is how much love is clear in Paul's narrative voice--it really elevates the whole story into something beautiful. Really wonderful work.
I agree; I would like to read how the author might handle this story developing to include bi-male action and bi-female action, integrated into their core MMF polyamory.