All Comments on 'Anja Enjoys'

It was a very good story. The dialogue of the boyfriend was nice. If you could have the Lady speak with such authority she could easily be a wonderful mature gentle Dominatrix who goes around the neighborhood picking the cherries of young boys while teaching them proper bedside manners.

The whole sausage/cooking metaphor is overused here. The idea was amusing at first, but quickly got uninteresting.

As one person has already said, the references to cookery quickly became boring and turned me right off.

Pay no attention to those who criticize your use of the cooking metaphor. They have no imagination, and little apprection for double entendre word play. You use the form well, and it's tantalizing, arousing, and fulfilling -- like any good cuisine. I hope you keep writing, and seeking other ways to prepare a tasty dish for your readers.

Steve