by Bramblethorn
This is a great story line and premise. On top the that, the sexy parts are original and vivid. Hurry up with the next section please!
Im really enjoying this series. Well written and thought out.
Good plot driven story with good sex scene , what more could you ask for?
Im hooked.
Nothing like a History lesson, and the joke at the end was very funny, I almost fell off my chair laughing, can't wait for the next part
And that was just for that last joke. But seriously this is a great story. The characters are everyday people and so likable. Great pacing and story telling. Thank you for sharing your time and talent.
A Stringed Instrument is one of my favourite stories on this site and this is shaping up to challenge it. I love the details built into the story that make it come alive like the way the author deals with grief and behaves when she is nervous. You are an original and exceptional writer, I hope the story is as long as your other major work, though I am not happy at the idea of having to to wait months until it is complete!
The joke in the end made me laugh. I must say, this is turning out to be a very good story of yours. Keep it up.
As a girl from Asia, I really like how you deal with cultural differences. Thank you so much for sharing your talented story. Can't wait to read more.
anonymous: lots of credit there to LaRascasse, who gave me plenty of advice on Anjali's family!
Apologies for the ongoing delay with Chapter 4; it's been a rough couple of months and I haven't had much time/energy for writing, but I'm still working on this. Sloooowly.
Hi Anonymous! Hopefully in the next few weeks. I got derailed by a bunch of things, but I spent most of last weekend writing and I'm well into chapter 5, so I should have something to post soon. If you want to get a notification when that happens, you can either use the email list, or set up an account here and follow mine.
of the series. I come back to it often. I especially like how here, more than any other, Sarah indulges herself and treats Anjali like a servant, an employee.
Slow burning ..... There's not much feelings in, those date nights feeling like math tech measured ones ...... And i thought girls more on the emotional softer side of lve