by mimaster
That was Sexy and touching
Well done
244 Jake
In the Sea of mediocrity it is refreshing to find a story of this quality. Further I go , better it gets. Thanks mate.
Just love this series. Well written. Sexy. Hot. Romantic. Touching.
and the part about the cucumber was hysterical!!! and somewhat....disturbing all at the same time... :-o
I'm not so sure how I feel about Nancy anymore, lol. I have a weird feeling that she might be one of those people that say one thing but does another. Not so sure she doesn't want anything more than just some 'fun' with Neil. Although she seems to agree that they shouldn't be playing around in work it looks like she has plans for Neil in the future. Little comments like 'the fuck we would have shared, if Ann wouldn't have stopped us" and "when we have our date, will you take me dancing"? (She annoys me a bit) Sounds like she's already setting her sights on him. I think she might be one to keep an eye on :-o
Now with meeting Ann's parents. I cannot believe Neil had to balls to say all of those things to her mother....even though he was 100% right and they needed to be said anyway...I was still shocked that he said all of that. It seems like some of what he said penetrated Jean's head a bit. Time will tell I guess. One thing I really like about Neil is his quick wit. His personality is priceless and is great at making awkward situations so much less. I thought it was also very brave of him to mention the 'ex' to Ann's father too....to see what kind of reaction he would get from him on that. Living in a small town might suck because everyone knows your business but I'm glad at least that it worked out on Neil's behalf and his ex was proved to be the fuck up and not him.
and am I SO HAPPY now that they have finally gotten together! It was just as I thought it was going to be between them. Hot, impatient, lust, awe and ending with slow, gentle and romantic love making. Neil has a lot of catching up to do now. After tonight Ann's like...9 up on him now? Neil sounds like every girl's dream guy ;)
and I do think it's something how first Neil and now Ann are kind of 'testing' each other. First Neil with the hotel, and now Ann asking him about him being hard..."Are you sure that's not from Nancy"? and asking him if he was going to fuck Nancy after she left. They're both testing each other in different ways but for the same reasons....
Cute & sad all at the same time. Looking forward to the next part :)