by mimaster
wow, this series just keeps getting and better! looking forward to the next installment. they seem to be coming pretty quickly, hope that continues
all that hemming and hawing in the last chapter, all that building up of angst - and then you do it again and make me smile, then snicker and finally laugh out loud; before the end of the first page! Waaay to go, kudos!!
I'm really enjoying the plot of this story, but the time jumping structure can sometimes be confusing. I'm not sure that it helps the story. Sometimes it feels like something you have to fight through.