All Comments on 'Ann Teases a Disabled Young Man'

This story starts well, be gets to slow. Hard to believe it's less than two pages but it bogged down late on page one.

The story line was quite good. Your English is very good with only a few jumbled words. Reading several languages, I know that word order is often more difficult than grammar, except for French, which has at least one exception for every rule. Please keep writing. The more you write, the better you get!

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Nicely written. Very erotic