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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
control and abuse

is not erotic

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Tenderness

Just add some tenderness and/or an explanation of why she told him he abuses her and of the reference to months of neglect. Then we probably have an erotic scene. I like your writing.

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