All Comments on 'Anna Ch. 02'

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WilliamTellsOvertureWilliamTellsOverturealmost 14 years ago
I like the odd funny elements in the story.

Jocelyn, the preacher's wife was one of those. I notice that Malcolm finally firgured out how to overcome his mother's reluctance and bring out her real lust. She just wanted Malcolm to overpower her slowly and gradually. Again well written and edited.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
a fine story of hot motherfucking by an author still in his 30s

Malcolm is a very lucky kid. He does what countless other boys'd love doing, would probably kill to do. He sticks his hard young cock up the wonderful hole between his mother's legs, the same hole he came out of. No wonder he's awed. "He was thinking 'God! I'm actually fucking my mum!'" Yes, you are, and you're doing a great job of it. After Malcolm blows his hot young balls right up his mommy's warm wet cunt, he contemplates the best sight any son ever can, "his cum oozing out of her hole." Attaboy, kid. You know exactly where you're big loads of sperm belong. Happy motherfucking, young buddy.

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