All Comments on 'Anna Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Enjoying Story

Fucking up with girlfriend was realistic and Rachel and Ann was hot, thanks, looking for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good story lets continue the saga!

I was hoping to hear more about the relatiosnhip with the GF and the other mom. Anyway still a great story, waiting for the next installment although not sure where you will take it next? Will Anna show the hubby want a youngster can do or will the two moms enjoy him more often and more extensively. Thanks for a great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Not bad

It reads like you ran out of steam at the end. Still, pretty good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Needs to be longer with more detail

The plot is good, the build up is great, but the delivery could be a lot better. Just as you get horny reading the latest chapter it comes to a sudden end. There should be more descriptive detail of the looks, the bodies, the sex; then a good story would be great. Cheers Menderman

Gus AsparGus Asparalmost 15 years ago
Wow!

Really enjoying this series - which I've only just found. It's just my kind of fantasy!

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 9 years ago
its like that Bill Withers song

'You keep on using me/ until you use me up. ' This series has gamesmanship galore one of my favs.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Perfunctory

Passionless. 💩☠️🤢❌

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