by Linbido
Sometimes we have to compromise to gain what we want in life, we simply have to come to terms with the price. These two did, and it looks like love blossomed fully.
The quality of this stotry lies in the smooth language and the two great characters that seems very realistic. This kames tha situation and the sex really hot. I hope to see more of your stories in the future.
Great first story. It's solid writing, with good characters and a very arousing setting.
That 'After the show...' paragraph is as good as anything I have ever read anywhere.
I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Gave it a five in fact, as it was well written for the most part with a couple of typos that made little difference. However you might want to read your stories one last time before submitting them after your friend edits them to get rid of those typos, too. Just a thought.
The writing style is great. Casual and unpretentious. I really enjoyed reading it and there were regular gem moments in the story at intervals which made me smile again and again so that I was anticipating the next one. I wasn't disappointed. Thanks for writing this one and don't make us wait too much for the next. :)
Loved it. Your character tells a wonderful remembrance and then brings us to the present, even the author talking to us in the front fits neatly into the story.
Hope you do more stories.
is off putting, I don't think I've read story on Lit that had one like that. but I still enjoyed the story :)
A very good written story and loved the story line. I guess it proves that even "whores' are human beings with human, womanly feelings. I hope you'll write more about these characters.
Thanks Joe
Great story - wonderful surprising transition from virgin to prostitute. Have you read "Eleven Minutes" yet? Ciao, LouXIV